Feedback from a Graphic Designer (Ranjit Sihat)

Front Cover:

• The line in between the date and price needs to be central.
• The central image of Taylor Lautner needs to be moved over a few mms in order for the "Who's Afraid" to be shown properly.
• The writing at the bottom of the cover needs to be central compared to the hearts on the page.
• The word "Teen" shouldn't be overlapped with the word "Simply".
• The white border on the magazine front cover needs to be equal.

Advertisement:

• The opacity of the image needs to be reduced.
• The white line surrounding the central image needs to be taken off

Contents:

• The word "February" shouldn't overlap the word "Contents".
• The "O" in "On the Cover" needs to be in line with the word "Contents".
• The alignment on the right hand side needs to be changed - for example, the number "27" is too close to the picture of Besard and Ardit.
• The spacing in the contents box needs to be equal - for example, the gap between "Fashion" and "33" needs to be the same as the others.
• The writing following page "33" on the brainstorm is unfinished.